toronto_gal ([info]toronto_gal) wrote,
@ 2004-04-09 05:58:00
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Analyzing Dawn...
Heh - I figure I might as well take the plunge and actually post something substantial in my silly little journal. Elsewhere, I’ve made it a habit of rambling about little Dawn Summers - a character that intrigues me, as I rarely see her being analyzed. So for posterity’s sake, I figure I’ll consolidate some of my past and present thoughts regarding the youngest Summers girl...


A bit of a preface - one thing that draws me to the Buffyverse is its wealth of richly textured and well-realized inhabitants. These characters are written with intricate emotional layers that are fascinating to analyze. And from my perspective, little Dawn Summers is no exception. I know there are those who aren’t fond of her - and that’s cool by me. But Dawn is a character I’ve really grown to enjoy. I think she holds her fair share of depth, complexity, and significance.

Thematically, I see her intrinsically linked to the notion of ‘family’. To throw in a fun fact - according to Kristine Sutherland, Joss originally envisioned Dawn as a five or six year-old girl that Joyce would adopt. However, Joss later came up with the notion of the Key, which evolved into a metaphorical adoption story. And that’s what we saw play out during Season 5. To a large extent, that was the heart of Dawn’s S5 story - a metaphor for a girl finding out that she’s adopted. On first viewing, I didn’t notice this aspect of things. But when re-watching it through that lens, there’s so much neat subtext built into the season. Especially during Blood Ties - Steven DeKnight was specifically instructed to write that episode as a metaphor for adoption. And I really love the sentiment it expresses…

To illustrate the parallels - in the real world, how would a girl feel if she found out her family was not her biological family? What effect would it have on her? Initially, the girl might feel somewhat betrayed and lied to. She might question whether her adoptive parents/siblings are even her ‘real’ family… she might feel as though she’s been living a life under false pretenses. Dawn goes through all of this during Blood Ties. Yet in the end, the episode sends a very heartfelt message about adoption. Because as Buffy tells Dawn - “It doesn't matter how you got here or where you came from. You are my sister”. Which sends a message that I quite enjoy - the notion that shared lineage doesn’t necessarily make a family ‘real’… instead it’s intimate emotional connections that truly define a family. Love is what makes a family genuine.

As such, I found a lot of resonance in the Summers family interactions. And looking back at it, I find Dawn’s plight quite affecting. Finding out that she’s the Key was a traumatic event - in one fell swoop she lost her sense of normalcy, her sense of self, and her sense of family. With the help of her sister and mother, she was starting to piece those things together. But the whole ordeal brought to light some of Dawn’s own emotional issues. Basically, the poor kid has a tendency towards self-flagellation - she often blames herself for things that are totally beyond her control. You start seeing this trait exhibited during Listening To Fear and Forever. And later, you see Dawn blaming herself for Spike’s wounds, Tara’s brain-suck, and Giles’ harpooning. Technically, the girl had no control over any of that - yet the poor kid still blames herself for everyone else’s woe. She feels there must be something inherently wrong with her, and even says as much - “I’m like a lightning rod for pain and hurt, and everyone around me suffers and dies”. That’s a rather dreadful way to look at oneself... but given all she’s been through, Dawn is building up some major self-worth issues. When something goes wrong in her life, she often finds a way to blame it on herself...

Which is something that carries over to S6!Dawn. Heh - I know that some folk don’t have much sympathy for Dawn of Season Six. And on my own first viewing of that season, I really didn’t attune myself to the character. So I also had my moments where I was like… “Grr! - what’s up with this kid?” But since then, I’ve put a lot more thought into her situation. And now I have a great deal of sympathy for her plight - in my view, the poor girl has reason to become such a mess. It’s a sentiment that Joss Whedon echoes. He states that to understand Dawn's turmoil, you must consider that ‘she's been abandoned by about six parental figures... she has huge issues’. Only upon re-watching S6 did I fully tap into Whedon’s sentiment. There were indeed (at least) six parental figures taken from Dawn’s life… and I started seeing how the toll on her was becoming worse and worse.

To illustrate…

  • Joyce - losing one's mother is devastating for any child. The relationship between Dawn and Joyce was portrayed as very warm and loving - and when Joyce passes away, Dawn takes it very hard. During Forever, we see just how desperate Dawn is for a stable parental figure - without her mother, the girl feels so lost that she literally attempts to raise the dead. Like any child, she needs the affection, acceptance and security that a parent brings. The only reason Dawn does away with zombie!Joyce is due to a renewed emotional connection with Buffy. From that point forward, Buffy is the one who fills a motherly role towards Dawn. And that bond becomes very potent. But then Buffy dies… and in rapid succession, Dawn has lost the two most important people in her life. I think that left some rather serious emotional scars.

  • Buffybot - Dawn’s interactions with Buffybot subtly reveal how damaged the child is. The poor kid clings to this machine as though it were her real sister - she even refers to it as ‘Buffy’, and has to correct herself afterwards. When Buffybot cheerfully hugs Dawn and says, “you’re my sister”, watch the child’s face - you see a poignant mix of awkwardness and appreciation. And when Dawn lies in bed next to the Buffybot? - that just about broke my heart. The poor girl misses her sister so much, that she seeks comfort in this artificial recreation. During Bargaining, note that it’s Buffybot that takes Dawn to parent-teacher day. There’s a lot of sad irony in that fact… Dawn’s ‘parent’ in that scenario isn’t even a real person. Which is subtle foreshadowing of the child’s S6 issues - because at heart, S6!Dawn is a girl trying to find a parent.

  • Giles - was pretty much a parental figure for all the Scoobs. When he leaves the first time, watch the way the scene is put together - his goodbye to Dawn is given a great deal of weight. The camera lingers on those two for quite a while. Afterwards, Dawn is shown stammering, and seems upset. And when she later tells Buffy how Giles left, she sounds weirded out by the notion.

  • Buffy - losing Buffy was traumatic enough the first time. When she returns, Dawn tells her how difficult it’s been. She begs her sister to stay, and says something I view as rather prophetic - “I promise I'll do better, I will… if you're with me…” But that’s the thing of it - for most of the season, Buffy *isn’t* with Dawn. After her resurrection, Buffy is suffering from her own damage, and is far too messed-up to be a stable parental figure. She pawns Dawn off on Giles, takes little interest in the kid’s life, and gives off the impression that she’s miserable, and wants to leave. I think that had a profoundly negative effect on Dawn… because Buffy is the most central and defining figure in the child’s life. Dawn seeks Buffy’s love and acceptance above all else. So when Buffy withdraws and grows distant, the poor kid doesn’t understand why. She starts assuming that she's the cause of Buffy's misery. She feels that Buffy can't stand to be around her - as I said earlier, Dawn has a habit of blaming herself when she shouldn't. You see this come to light during Dead Things and Normal Again. After losing so many people, Dawn is building up some severe self-esteem and abandonment issues.

  • Tara - was the one person who was doing a good parental job with Dawn. So when she leaves the house, Dawn is devastated - if you re-watch Tara’s exit scene in Tabula Rasa, Dawn seems to take things tremendously personally. Considering that Giles was also leaving (again), Dawn is hit with a double-whammy of abandonment. Being the empathic person she is, Tara is the only Scoob that clues in on Dawn’s emotional suffering. She gently tells the child that ‘my moving out had nothing to do with you’. She realizes that Dawn has started blaming herself for all the abandonment going on in her life.

  • Willow - like Tara, Willow played a parental role at Casa De Summers (before Buffy was resurrected). After spending many a night alone, Dawn is comforted when Willow agrees to spend some time with her. But rather than providing Dawn with a renewed sense of safety, addict!Willow ruptures it even further. She does the opposite of what a responsible guardian would do - she taunts Dawn, and gets her into a car accident, thus breaking her arm.

  • Spike - in my view, the Spike/Dawn dynamic was quite charming (and on a sidenote - I wish they repaired that friendship during S7). But to get back on topic - ironically, Spike was more protective of Dawn than most of the Scoobs. As such, Dawn felt safe being around him and asks to be taken to his crypt. At which point, she finds out he’s left town without saying goodbye. She tries to remain loyal to him, but then Xander tells her about Spike’s assault on Buffy. And thus Dawn’s sense of safety evaporates.


Prior to that, Dawn had already been exposed to a rather horrific event - Tara’s death. Note how deliriously happy Dawn was when Tara was moving back in - by that point, Tara was one of the few people who made Dawn feel safe. The girl was so grateful to have Tara back in the house. And then the poor kid finds Tara's body, cold and dead on the floor - which was akin to losing a motherly figure all over again. That whole scene where Dawn is huddled in the corner, pretty much breaks my heart. Especially Dawn’s reason for staying in the room - “I didn’t want to leave her alone”. That line really struck a chord. Because a huge element of Dawn’s S6 story was the pain of being alone - I found it quite tragic that she couldn’t bear the thought of Tara being lonely.

So yeah - Dawn makes a whole lot more sense to me, now. On first viewing of S6, I really didn’t pay much attention to her. I didn’t think about what she was going through, and I didn’t pick up on the subtle cues of her emotional issues. But when re-watching, I see exactly what Joss is alluding to - a child being faced with a steady stream of loss and abandonment. For me at least, it helps explain why she becomes so messed-up - and it makes me quite sympathetic to her plight. Everyone keeps leaving her, and she keeps blaming herself. The poor kid is bouncing off the Scoobs, trying to find a stable parental figure - yet they all fail her. She’s deathly afraid of being left alone. Yet none of the Scoobs realize how desperately insecure she is. Her rebelliousness slowly transmutes into a full-blown cry for help - but no-one takes notice. IMO, all the parental abandonment wreaked havoc on Dawn’s sense of safety, and self-esteem. And as Halfrek pointed out, none of the Scoobs clued in on the cause and extent of her pain.

That being said, I don’t blame the gang for not noticing Dawn. I love all the Scoobs - and bless their hearts, they all had their own issues to deal with. In general, the S6!Scoobs fell victim to a very troubled, and splintered group dynamic - and that had a damaging effect on all of them. They were all battling their own problems, and often didn’t notice the effect they were having on Dawn. So in the end, all their problems intertwined in a rather tragic fashion. No child can be emotionally healthy without a stable parental figure. But due to their own issues, none of the Scoobs were well equipped to fill that role. Joss has often described the Scooby Gang as a ‘created family’ - I think S6 exposed the pain caused when that family dynamic fell apart. Which is why Dawn tugs at my heartstrings - because I see her as a rather damaged child who’s very much in need of a family.

As I’ve said previously, I think Dawn’s place in the narrative is synonymous with a ‘family’ theme. Consider Normal Again - that ep contains some fun meta-comments about the story of BtVS. In the episode, the entire mythos of Sunnydale is described as a mere delusion of crazy!Buffy. And that allows for some intriguing implications during those mental institution scenes. The doctor tells Buffy that - “you’re with your family”. And upon hearing the word ‘family’, Buffy automatically whispers the name ‘Dawn’. The doctor then notes that Buffy inserted Dawn into her delusion to fulfill the need for a familial bond. Which IMO, is a neat way of noting how the writers inserted Dawn into the story to explore the nature of familial bonds.

As such, I think Dawn holds a pretty important place in the Buffyverse - thematically, I find the notion of family quite resonant. And Dawn nicely illuminates different aspects of familial bonds. During S5, we see the emotion involved in the presence of family. During S6, we see the damage done in the absence of family. And for me at least, the Buffy/Dawn dynamic became one of the most heartfelt relationships on the show. There are so many neat contrasts and parallels between my Summers girls. In many ways Dawn is a reflection of Buffy - yet in many ways they completely diverge. But regardless of the similarities and differences, the two girls are very much connected. For Dawn, Buffy is pretty much the center of her universe - the child’s emotional health is hugely dependant on Buffy’s affection. So when S7!Buffy starts showing Dawn some steady, positive attention, little Dawn really blossoms. She’s finally got what she needed all along - a stable sense of family.

Beyond that, I quite like Dawn in and of herself. Beneath her emotional issues, I see a very sweet and caring girl. I love her dorky, awkward, wide-eyed exuberance. And I quite enjoy the youthful vibe she brought to the Scoobs. Plus, whenever Dawn and Buffy get all sisterly, I often break out into a smile - I like seeing my Summers girls happy. Personally, I enjoy Dawn in all her iterations. She has moments where she’s brimming with bubbly enthusiasm and times when she’s completely lacking in confidence - through it all, she remains somewhat of an ingénue. Like any person, she has her flaws and her foibles and her moments of angst - but there are so many moments where I find her charming and quite heart-breaking. So in the end, I’ve built up quite a bit of affection for the littlest Summers girl.

Well - if you’ve managed to read through all that, you deserve a medal of some sort! Thanks to anyone who sat through my silly long-winded ramblings =)

- Allyson (elsewhere known as Lil Miss Muffet)




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[info]soundingsea
2004-04-09 06:11 am UTC (link)
I really enjoyed reading this. You have a lot of insight into Dawn's character, and it shows!

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-04-09 01:43 pm UTC (link)
Aww - thanks for the reply, m'dear! I'm glad you enjoyed my perspective on Dawn - the kind comments are very much appreciated =)

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[info]thesecondevil
2004-04-09 07:51 am UTC (link)
You have such fantastic insight to Dawn's character, I really enjoyed reading this.

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-04-09 01:51 pm UTC (link)
Hee - thanks for the kind appraisal =) I really appreciate that you read through my long-winded spiel. I quite enjoy analyzing the characters of BtVS - so I'm glad you found it of some value. Thanks again!

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[info]azdak
2004-04-09 10:10 am UTC (link)
Ah, cool - the Definitive Theory of Dawn all in one place. I've always liked Dawn, partly, I think, because Michelle Trachtenberg is a very good actress - and considering her age an amazing one - but also because I'm a sucker for a child's perspective. One of my favourite Dawn scenes is that one between her and Riley when her mother's in hospital - it's a shame for Dawn's sake that Riley broke up with Buffy, because he would have been a very good paternal figure for her (much better than Spike, who really wasn't cut out for the role of babysitter, bless him).

I think some of Dawn's annoyingness areose not only because of her separation anxieties, but also because being excluded from Slaying activities made her feel inadequate. Buffy was so keen to give her the girlhood she'd never had, that she failed to see how inferior it made Dawn feel.

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-04-09 02:37 pm UTC (link)
Ah, cool - the Definitive Theory of Dawn all in one place

You're far too kind, good madam =) Hee - it's funny that as long as this Dawn analysis was, I still left out quite a large chunk of what I wanted to say. I was tempted to go into a bunch of detail regarding Buffy/Dawn parallels, and I wanted to dig deeper into the evolution of S7!Dawn. But once it grew longer than 2500 words, I was like - 'okay... time to cut it short'. So strange though it may sound, this isn't even my comprehensive theory of Dawn. *sigh* - curse my infernal long-windedness =)

Switching gears - I also quite liked the bit of Dawn/Riley interaction that we got. And I agree that Riley would have been a good paternal figure for Dawn... he seemed to have some genuine affection for the kid. Heh - now that I think about it, my icon contains an embedded Riley reference... that's his jacket that's covering Sleepy!Dawn =)

And I definitely agree that being excluded from the world of Slaying was another factor in Dawn's emotional issues. Like you said, I think a sense of inadequacy arises when a person is not allowed to contribute. And beyond that, I see Dawn as a child perpetually struggling to find a stable foothold in her sister's life. During S6, Dawn already felt that her grip on Buffy's affection was fleeting and ephemeral. And slaying is such a vital part of Buffy's world - so when she shuts Dawn out of that world, the poor kid views her connection with Buffy as even more tenuous.

On the flipside, Buffy is indeed just trying to give Dawn the life that she herself was denied. And I can't really blame her for that. It's a very motherly thing to do - trying to ensure that your child has a better life than you had. But Buffy's attempts at sheltering her sister had rather negative consequences on Dawn’s self-esteem. As you pointed out, Buffy didn't quite realize the effect she was having on Dawn. Thankfully, S7!Dawn was given the chance to get a better foothold in Buffy's life - cuz at the end of the day, I think Dawn's self-worth is intrinsically tied into Buffy's affection.

Anyhoo - as I've talked about over at TWoP I think there's a neat dichotomy between Buffy and Dawn, regarding the value of a 'normal' life. As I was saying earlier, there are a lot of parallels and contrasts between the girls.

Well - I'd better cut it short before I ramble on too long. Thanks very much for the kind reply - as per usual, your comments were very thoughtful and much appreciated =)

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[info]dlgood
2004-04-12 12:05 pm UTC (link)
During S6, Dawn already felt that her grip on Buffy's affection was fleeting and ephemeral. And slaying is such a vital part of Buffy's world - so when she shuts Dawn out of that world, the poor kid views her connection with Buffy as even more tenuous.

That has, BTW, described almost every character in the series at one point or another and underscores the tremendous demands and pressures Buffy has faced. So many characters base their self-esteem on Buffy's inclusion - incapable of understanding that Buffy frequently has to put her the performance of her many duties first. Completely seperate to her esteem or lack thereof for the other character in question.

To a large extent, Buffy could do a better job communicating her esteem so that Dawn, Xander, Willow et al wouldn't feel so hurt when Buffy shut them out of slaying. But given the low self-esteem of the group, there's really not much Buffy can do to "win" on that score.

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-04-12 03:45 pm UTC (link)
Hee - DaBigDave stopping by in my silly neck of the woods. Neat =)

I definately agree that the demands and pressures that Buffy faces are quite tremendous. It's really kind of tragic. And I agree that Buffy can't fully let her loved ones in on the life of a Slayer - they are indeed often hurt by that.

Though with that being said, I think the distance between Buffy and S6!Dawn was based in something deeper and darker than mere Slayer responsibility. Cuz in that case, Buffy wasn't neglecting Dawn simply because she was gung-ho about going out and performing her duties. Instead, I think Buffy was a damaged and clinically-depressed girl who was finding it more and more difficult to display affection. Personally, I think S6!Buffy had a hard time showing tenderness towards Dawn, because quite simply, she didn't want Dawn to provide her with affection in return. As Buffy admits during S7 - "I didn't want to be loved... I wanted to be punished". As such, Buffy withdraws from her loved ones, as a form of self-punishment. In her depressed state, she feels she's not worthy of their love, and thus she isolates herself from them.

And since Dawn is suffering from her own emotional issues, Buffy's growing coldness and distance has a huge adverse effect. The child can't understand Buffy's distance, and starts viewing herself as the cause. Poor Buffy is too damaged to comfort the kid. And in her depression, she continually exhibits signs of self-destructive behavior - which just magnifies Dawn's fear of abandoment. So their respective emotional issues feed into one another, sending them on a mutual downward spiral.

My Summers girls are delightfully messed up - but I love 'em nonetheless =)

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[info]dlgood
2004-04-12 06:52 pm UTC (link)
It's certainly a vicious cycle. I just sense that in S6, the neediness is so great that even an emotionally healthy Buffy couldn't have given what was desired of her.

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[info]fox1013
2004-04-09 10:26 am UTC (link)
*squeals*

Someone else who loves Dawnie and thinks she's important! Yay!

*snugs you*

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-04-09 02:47 pm UTC (link)
Hee! - I appreciate the enthusiastic reply! And yep - I'm indeed quite fond of Dawn's character =)

Heck - I love pretty much all the Buffyverse characters, and would happily ramble on about any of them. But since I don't see Dawn talked about that often, I have fun analyzing her. Heh - hopefully my long droning post didn't make you too sleepy =)

Thanks again!

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[info]doyle_sb4
2004-04-16 09:12 am UTC (link)
Terrific thoughts! I adore Dawn and this brought up some things I'd never considered about her.

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[info]mediumdave
2004-04-16 10:08 am UTC (link)
Yeah, great Dawn analysis! Toronto Gal also has an excellent point about the interconnected-ness of the characters' problems in S6... one could apply this to all of them, really. For example, the Xander and Anya situation. While I still think it was handled a bit awkwardly, it's comprehensible when you look at the big picture: Xander had misgivings about the marriage, but felt there was no one he could confide in about it. Giles was gone and so was Joyce; Buffy and Willow were preocupied with their own troubles. Tara he didn't know well enough, and Dawn was too young. Spike? Not likely. He might've confided in Riley, if Riley hadn't left. So he's left to deal with it alone, and his response is to supress his doubts and put on a happy face ("I'll never tell, ha ha ha"). Which doesn't work too well. *g*

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-04-17 07:25 pm UTC (link)
Nice seeing you over in my journal, Medium Dave! I've quite enjoyed your thoughts over at TWoP, and you seem like a very smart and thoughtful fellow =) Thanks most kindly for the positive assessment - it's much appreciated =)

And yep - as you astutely pointed out, I very much agree about the interconnected-ness of the character's problems in S6. In general, I think the Scoobs draw a lot of strength off one another. When things are bad, they lean on each other for support - except that in S6, their group dynamic started rupturing. And with no-one to lean on, they all came tumbling down a lot harder than they normally would have. It's the old adage of 'United they stand, divided they fall'. And boy, they fell pretty hard. *sigh* - my poor messed-up Scoobs.

Anyhoo - thanks again for the thoughtful reply! =)

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-04-17 07:14 pm UTC (link)
Hee - thanks for the warm regards! I'm glad that my analysis offered you some new things to consider, regarding Dawn's character =) Oh - and I should also add that your story entitled A Girl Made From Sky was a wonderfully unique piece of work - really good stuff!

Thanks again =)

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[info]valancy
2004-04-16 10:26 am UTC (link)
bravo. *very* much enjoyed. :D

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-04-17 07:31 pm UTC (link)
*blushes* - I'm quite glad you enjoyed reading my thoughts =) I'm grateful for the warm and positive reply - thank you! And I noticed that you even linked to my analysis over in your own journal - which was heckuva sweet, and very much appreciated =)

Thanks again!

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[info]valancy
2004-04-18 09:56 am UTC (link)
most welcome! :D

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[info]mpoetess
2004-04-16 10:58 am UTC (link)
*Very* nice! I love finding other folks who both like Dawn and appreciate the complexity of her character and purpose.

In the list of parental figures who abandoned her, there's also Hank, of course, who can't be reached most of the time after Joyce's and Buffy's deaths, and doesn't even know about Buffy's death, as he isn't in on the Bot-Plot. Dawn's last tie to her adoptive-real family at the beginning of S6 isn't even interested in her after his ex-wife dies. (Though that's one of the least organic ones for me. Don't get me started on the lack of development from Hank of S2 who's still making an effort to connect with Buffy and talk with Joyce about her to the deadbeat-dad Hank of S5/6.)

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-04-17 07:50 pm UTC (link)
Hee - thanks ever so much for the warm and thoughtful reply - you're a sweetie =)

It's nice to see I'm not alone in my view of Dawn - I quite agree that her character has her share of complexity and purpose. And yep - I also think that Hank's absence would have had an effect on Dawn. From what I hear, the Buffy comics touch upon some of Buffy and Dawn's history, as defined by the constructed-memories. And apparently, even that incarnation of Dawn was showing subtle hints of abandonment issues (in regards to Buffy). I'm not sure that the comics are considered authoritative or canonical - but even so, I think it nicely fleshed out how pre-teen Dawn might start having emotional issues due to Hank's leaving. The poor girl has indeed lost a whole bunch of people.

Anyhoo - thanks again for the reply! It was much appreciated =)

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[info]caniatone
2004-04-16 11:36 am UTC (link)
You know, it's funny but I never thought of the adoption analogy although hearing it now makes so much sense. But yes, with the abandonment, and I always think that even early on there was Dawn's father left too.

It wasn't dealt with in the show, and although it never really happened to her technically, the memories instilled by the monks feel real, and therefore she'd likely still feel a sense of loss from a Father who basically is out of her life completely.

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-04-17 08:19 pm UTC (link)
Thanks ever so much for dropping by with this thoughtful reply =) I very much agree with your point about Dawn in relation to Hank - as you touched upon, I definately think Dawn would feel a sense of loss, regarding her Father. In a comment above this one, I discussed Hank a bit further - but I think you're quite right that Dawn would be affected by the memories instilled by the Monks.

Hee - and I'm glad that that my discussion of the adoption metaphor gave you a new vantage point on Dawn's character =) And hey - don't feel bad about not picking up on it, upon first viewing S5. Cuz originally, that metaphor totally passed me by, as well. When I started checking out the internet fandom, someone linked to (this article regarding Blood Ties). That got me thinking about the adoption metaphor, and that's when it all started falling into place. But prior to that, it flew right over my head =)

But that's what I find neat about the show - how it offers you new layers of meaning upon multiple viewings. It was kind of surreal when I was re-watching S5 - because when I knew to look for it, there's so much subtext regarding adoption. And bless his heart, Joss Whedon explicitly tried to get the audience to pick up on that. Take for example, this comment by one of Dawn's friends, during The Body...

LISA: Well, that was when you were wigging out about your family, and of course Kirsty's gotta turn everything into a story... she was telling people that you were adopted...

Hee - that was one rather definative reference to the metaphor... so when re-watching the season I'm kinda kicking myself, thinking, 'Ack! - how did I not notice this?' So yeah - it's weird in a way... until I specifically started looking out for it, that metaphor completely escaped my attention. But now that I know that it's there, I pick up on all this wonderful subtext. Which is what's great about this show - it's so layered =)

Anyhoo - I'm really glad you gained a new perspective from reading my analysis. Thanks ever so much for the thoughtful reply =)

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[info]butterfly
2004-04-16 01:13 pm UTC (link)
That was a really great essay -- I actually ending up tearing up near the middle. Because of all the abandonment.

I can remember when I identified with Dawn and started really liking her -- Older and Far Away, when she screams, "Get out!", that was the first time that I remembered that I did that all the time as a kid, and I remembered what it meant to me (which was never actually 'get out' -- it was 'stay, stick around, don't leave, please don't go away') and it broke my heart and I was totally a Dawn fan after.

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-04-17 08:59 pm UTC (link)
That was a really great essay -- I actually ending up tearing up near the middle. Because of all the abandonment.

Aww! - you're a darling! It's very high praise hearing that my silly little essay evoked an emotional response. I'm glad it managed to strike a chord, and I'm extremely grateful for the thoughtful reply - thank you! =)

I enjoyed hearing how you became a Dawn fan. And I quite agree that Dawn's outburst in Older and Far Away stemmed from her need to have the Scoobs stick around. But by then, she was an emotional mess, and a bundle of nerves and could no longer express herself in a rational fashion. I think she'd been repressing her insecurities for too long, and ends up lashing out once they were finally released. So she indeed yells at the Scoobs to leave when all she wants is for them to stay. For me, it's one of those eps that makes more sense in retrospect. On first viewing of S6, I really didn't focus much on Dawn. But looking back, I pick up on all the little moments where she's left alone... you can see how much it bothers her, yet she puts on a brave face and tries to hold it together. She does her best to suppress her issues - but by submerging them, she only makes them worse. So when Halfrek talks about how much pain she could sense from Dawn? - that makes much more sense to me, now.

Anyhoo - thanks again for such the warm reply and the kind words! =)

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[info]hobviously
2004-04-17 03:34 am UTC (link)
Thank you for this. I've never been a Dawn fan, but this raises some interesting points that I shall have to consider when next I rewatch seasons 5-7.

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-04-17 09:09 pm UTC (link)
You're quite welcome! And thank you for the kind assessment =)

I know there are those who don't share my fondness for Dawn - and that's quite cool by me =) It's nice to hear you'll keep some of my points in mind upon re-watching S5-S7. That's one of the things I enjoy about the show - how I pick up on new stuff, each time I re-watch. So if my essay ends up giving you a new vantage point on those seasons, it's quite gratifying =)

Thanks for the reply! =)

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[info]avrelia
2004-04-18 03:04 pm UTC (link)
I finally managed to read everything – including the comments – and I love your Dawn thoughts very much (and Dawn herself). I had similar ideas, somewhere in the far side of my brain, but you wrote it all in coherent sentences. Which is more than I could have done. Plus, I never really considered the adoption perspective, but it makes all kind of sense.
Even without this perspective, Dawn as formerly blob of green energy had some issues with her realness – beside the abandonment, etc. She wanted a steady ground, the feeling that she is real, she exists, which she tried to find outside – in her family.

Since I agree with everything regarding Seasons 5-6 Dawn, I’d love to talk more about season 7 Dawn. She does have more of a steady attention from Buffy, including slaying practice – until potentials appear, anyway. But then Buffy is forced into the general role, and Dawn falls on the wayside – again. Only this time she picks herself up, and finds her own niche, without leaning on Buffy, or waiting for Buffy to choose her – she chooses herself to stay and fight.

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-04-20 01:03 pm UTC (link)
Hee - I'm glad my post tapped into some of your own sentiments regarding Dawn =) And thanks ever so much for the positive assessment - it's much appreciated! Beyond that, I quite enjoyed hearing your own thoughts on her character...

I very much agree that part of Dawn's struggle is her search for steady ground and a place in the world. It's something that's nicely echoed during the episode Potential. With regards to the potentials, Buffy says this...

Most people in this world have no idea why they're here or what they want to do...

Upon hearing that line, there's a shot of Dawn's reaction - and the poor girl looks so sad and crest-fallen. So I definately agree that finding one's place is a big theme with Dawn. It's those age-old questions of 'who am I?', and 'where do I fit?'

Heh - I could write a whole other essay regarding Dawn of S7 =) As you thoughtfully pointed out, I think she was indeed starting to carve out a niche of her own. Though at the same time, I think the season often echoed just how much Dawn defines herself through Buffy. I see a bunch of parallels, contrasts, and interconnections between those girls. S7!Dawn is much more emotionally healthy than she once was - though I still see shades of her struggle with self-worth, as well as whisperings of her abandoment issues. Sadly, I don't have time to fully delve into these fun topics - cuz right now I'm knee-deep in exam season =)

But I loved hearing your thoughts on S7!Dawn - and thanks ever so much for the kind words! =)

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[info]ludditerobot
2004-05-28 05:43 pm UTC (link)
My first take on Dawn was that Joss was working the "kid trick" from soap operas. He did a lot of stunt stuff, seemingly just to see if he could do it. An all-dream ep. An all-silent ep. A musical ep. That there's more to Dawn than Joss' hubris is wondeful.

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-05-28 06:22 pm UTC (link)
Hee - hearing that Buffy was gonna have a kid sister was a weird thing to hear, back in the day. There was indeed that sense that maybe Dawn was simply being inserted for the sake of shaking things up. i.e., - messing with the audience for the sake of messing with the audience. Thankfully though, it seems Joss put quite a lot of thought into the message behind Dawn's character...

According to the DVDs, as far back as S3, he was telling the writers that S4 was going to be about the giddy freedom of college, and that S5 would then draw things back to the notion of family. Which provides a really great impetus for Dawn's introduction. She quite nicely allows Buffy to head into different emotional territory - rather than exploring affection for a boyfriend, Dawn allows for an exploration into familial love. As the writers have often said, Buffy's 'romance' in S5 is meant to be with Dawn. And for me at least, that relationship really resonated.

So yep - the introduction of a mysterious little sister could have indeed ended up being a wacky stunt for the sake of a wacky stunt. Thankfully though, Joss seemed to have put a lot of thought into the thematic significance of Dawn's character. In my view, she's a really wonderful exploration into the notion of family =)

Anyhoo - thanks ever so much for the insightful reply. I really enjoyed hearing your thoughtful reflections on Dawn's character =)

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[info]jmatonak
2004-05-29 01:03 am UTC (link)
That's a great essay.

I have this idea that I haven't really thought all the way through about identity as a continuing theme in Buffy. And reading your analysis above, it strikes me that Dawn goes through a lot of uncertainty about her place and purpose in the latter half of S5. She wonders if she's real, she wonders if she can be good. It makes sense, because family is one of the touchstones we use to remind ourselves of who we are. I'm a son and a brother, for instance.

Dawn's adoption metaphor always struck me as emotionally perfect, and overdrawn in just the right way. Not only does she find out she's been adopted by her family, she's sort of been adopted by the whole human species. It's not like she has "birth parents" she could go look for. Her origins are utterly incomprehensible.

I'm starting to ramble. Basically, I want to say two things. I loves me some Dawn. That essay was neat, and thought-provoking. Thanks!

(I friended you. Hope that's okay.)

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-05-29 02:25 pm UTC (link)
Wonderful thoughts! I really enjoyed your neat, philosophical sentiments. And I quite agree - a large component of identity is defined through those around us. In a way, our sense of self doesn't exist in isolation. We exist in relation to others... and those relationships forge a part of who we are. As you so thoughtfully pointed out, family is one of those touchstones that reminds us of our identity.

Which is part of the reason I really enjoy the Buffy/Dawn dynamic. I find it simultaneously charming, yet at the same time somewhat wistful. Because from my point-of-view, Dawn's sense of self is very much tied into Buffy's affection. The poor kid defines herself so much through her older sister. I'm reminded of this little exchange from Forever...

DAWN: I'm not like you, Buffy... I don't have anybody...
BUFFY: What? Of course you do. You have *me*...

For me, that kind of encapsulates the beauty and the tragedy of the Buffy/Dawn relationship. As I've said earlier, S5!Dawn pretty much lost everything... her sense of normalcy, her sense of self, and her sense of family. In Blood Ties, her life had pretty much fractured into splinters - and the thing that brought her back from the brink was Buffy's love and acceptance. Through her mother and sister, Dawn was rebuilding the things she'd lost. It's their affection that allows her to regain her sense of normalcy, renew her sense of self, and find strength in her sense of family. But when that familial affection is withdrawn? - things all come crumbling down... Dawn yet again becomes that broken and lost child who has nothing to hold on to. I think that's what we see happening during S6.

Ultimately, I think Dawn's emotional well-being is hugely connected to her relationship with Buffy. Pretty much every Dawn-centric episode in some way ties back into Buffy Summers. For Dawn, Buffy is simultaneously her older sister, her surrogate mother, and her last remnant of family - and thus the child defines herself so much through that relationship. Which I find rather poignant. Throughout her entire time on the show, I see that sentiment echoed - Dawn's quiet need to find a stable place in her sister's life.

As you were saying, I think the notion of 'identity' is often explored in BtVS. In fact, over at TWoP I wrote a series of posts discussing how I see 'crisis of identity' as a theme for all the characters in S6 =)

Dawn's adoption metaphor always struck me as emotionally perfect, and overdrawn in just the right way.

Oh, I totally agree. I really love the sentiment behind that metaphor. Heh - it's actually neat that you mentioned the idea of Dawn's 'birth parents'. Cuz strange though it may sound, one of the writers (possibly Drew Z. Greenberg) said that was an episode premise he had wanted to explore. Heh - I'm not sure what tone of voice he used when he said that, so he might very well have been joking. But apparently at some convention, he noted how he wanted to do that story - actually have Dawn's 'birth parents' show up... and they'd be glowing green energy =) Hee - that sounds kind of surreal. I wonder if they could've made such an episode work. I guess it's not entirely implausible - in its original form, the Key was described as 'living energy'. So I suppose it's possible that Dawn has 'birth parents'. Though it's really kind of weird thinking of that playing out as a story =)

Anyhoo - that was just a fun little sidenote. And I quite agree with what you were saying... the fact that Dawn's origins were left as rather mysterious really does supplement the poignancy of her situation.

(I friended you. Hope that's okay.)

Oh, it's entirely okay - in fact, it's very much appreciated. I've friended you in return =) Thanks ever so much for sharing your thoughts on Dawn - I really enjoyed hearing your insightful sentiments!

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[info]shepenwepet
2004-05-30 05:58 pm UTC (link)
This was great essay! It will go into my memories, and I want to link to it too.

I love Dawn. And I would very much like to read another essay on ses7!Dawn, if you find the time to write it.

Shepenwepet

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[info]toronto_gal
2004-05-30 10:45 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I very much appreciate that you linked to my essay... and it's really flattering that you're storing it in your memories section =)

Heh - going into a deeper analysis of S7!Dawn is indeed something that intrigues me. There's a lot of neat stuff going on with her character during that season. But sadly, my university classes are sucking dry a lot of my spare time. So for now at least, I probably won't get to venture into that fun analytical territory. But yeah - I definately think there's some cool stuff going on with S7!Dawn =)

Anyhoo - thanks again for dropping by - the kind words were very much appreciated =)

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[info]shepenwepet
2005-09-15 07:08 pm UTC (link)
Are you still around?

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[info]xanphibian
2005-11-30 05:01 am UTC (link)
Where've you been? Miss you. :)

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[info]powerofnature
2008-08-16 07:26 pm UTC (link)
I never hated Dawn, but I thought she was a bit annoying in season six, but still, you give very good reasons why she's actually a really strong character and I also like the family vibe that she brought to the show when she joined. She gave Buffy and the Scoobies also an awful lot responsibility, which was a huge step into making them become more mature.

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